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Melody

My heart is a piano waiting for a melody

You came along and played a love melody

I thought my life was another one passing by

Until I felt that feeling called love made by the people who had once gone by

You spread a smile across my face

Which will never cease,cos' I know your face

Love needs no answer or question

It just needs two people to ask that question

As you hold my hand in yours just like we were mean't to be

I know I'll let go cos' you and me are just like a sweet melody

 

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    August 31, 2008
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    I like your form here, thanks for entering.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    This was such a sweet and loving poem.

    Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.

    Margaret