She
is the beginning
of my journey.
I am humbled
before the knowledge
of which she is the guardian.
Soon I will walk
through the halls of time
and I will see the light.
A contest entry
- Gaze Upon The Divine With Closed Eyes...PIF by Blue Rew.
490 points, ended July 20, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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congratulations on the fine poem and trophy.
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Gratifying to see the spirituality shining
through here. Brevity does great justice
to hope spoken, leaving light between the
lines. Blue
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This poem looks to me like a prayer. Short, simple and oh, so nice.
~Sonja~
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silent
silent whispers of your steps then, into the ebb of light
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Short and simply beautiful.
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