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So you were not disappointed, my darling

This warm gorgeous sexy imaginative one

With the wonder of life and lust burning in her eyes

Lying curled next to you

So suddenly

Yes this one you were dream about

On one of your sites

Is me..

It’s still so sweet

To believe

To have you like this

To keep

All memories

All dreams

You don't even know how precious you are for me

And this wonder of life and all smiles

I feel just because you are here

In my mind, my heart, my life

It’s you who has burn this light

And all I try from now

Is to keep this still

Is to believe

In us

for real

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  • individuality gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, lots of smiling going on in this poem i think and the dance of love continues through the times.