I love you but its hard for me to show.
After the days turned to months my feelings began to grow.
I guess that in my way i already know.
That when things get to close im ready to blow
the lid off my top cause thats what I do.
I cant believe i have these feelings for someone like you.
I never that id be dreaming at night of a face that seems shoning in heavenly grace.
I guess to me your a gift from above.
Well thats why its hard to give you my love.
A contest entry
- I love you... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I would appreciate feedback regardless of what it is im just looking to improve my poetry
Comments
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this is nice matt! this gurl is definitlly lucky
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Ah..the story begins ..and love is depicted...well done.....and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece in my contest...
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