Be honest, I came from hard times like I was born in a
Sketch comedy with JJ and Florida
Good Times only come between me and a blunt
Ridin' round in da whip, yea its me in da front
Im keepin it real, I aint needin to front
Got da goons wit me case u wantin to stunt
Den its lights, camera, action lemme show u how its don
Class is now in session, pay attention to da lesson
Put the students at attention, slackers get detention
And the losers get suspension, while im workin for my pension
All these gangstaz cant be gangsta man! Somethin smellin fishy
And im the F'in ish like a smell straight from the tushy
Im standin on the edge so dont you dare push me
Ive been in da game since Nintendo and Atari
Chillin wit my kinfolk got these haters feelin sorry
Like an apology im droppin knowledge be
Like a fallin library
Im ready and willin
My lyrical prowess is steady and killin
Like a sniper military trained
I aim to please and please to aim
So heres the good night story RIDDLE ME DIS AND RIDDLE ME DAT
I spit a little of dis a little of dat
And put MCs to bed like a tylenol overdose
Im givin yall da oky doke
Throwin up da deucez everytime im outty
Mr. Ruff and Rowdy
Has a presence dats undeniable
Da flow is certifiable
Spit heat just like a lighter do
Im the truth tell me, why would I lie to you?
A contest entry
- Street Muzik by Freestyle Bushido.
500 points, ended July 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i think i did aight
Comments
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"Like an apology im droppin knowledge be
Like a fallin library" - Those are my favorite lines. I don't know if I told you this but you def know how to keep the reader's attention and what you spit is so real that I can feel it. I can relate to it and I can remember it hours later and that's tight. When you can write something that someone remembers hours after they have read it for the FIRST TIME, that is talent. Congrats on the honorable mention. Sorry it took me so long I've been busy with school.
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u don have to apologize....
its aight i understnd. but i got faith dat u ova there kickin schoolz a$$ and all and dat u doin good. u jus get tired. and when dat happens jus think of my rhymes and i gotcha lol
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i know these hard times all to well, i like how in your lyrics you see that good even the bad times. thanks for entering and good luck.
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You did more than alright. Nice. Keep it coming.
Dez
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