Desde entonces usted sonriera hola,
desde entonces usted agitara adiós,
no he podido guardar mi mente de usted.
Tengo que admitir,
teníamos muchos de buenas risas
y algunos gritos necesarios.
Teníamos nuestra parte justa de luchas,
pero compusimos siempre.
¿Por qué es éste tan diferente?
Bien, aprendí algo muy especial
durante nuestro tiempo junto:
Cada uno va a lastimarle más pronto o más adelante,
usted apenas tiene que decidir quién vale el dolor.
Usted estaba definitivamente digno de él.
Acabo de intentar conseguir con el dolor.
Comencé a gritar mismo para dormir en la noche;
Es mi arrullo.
No se preocupe de mí,
Tiempo cura todas las heridas,
o así que me han dicho.
Pero recuerde siempre:
Nunca me olvidaré que usted…
Te amo
Te quiero
Te necesito
[[Too bad you don't speak Spanish]]
Author notes
lol! you didn't really think I would make you read it just in Spanish did you?
Translation:
Ever since you smiled hello,
Ever since you waved goodbye,
I haven't been able to keep my mind off you.
I have to admit,
We had a lot of good laughs,
And a few necessary cries.
We had our fair share of fights,
But we always made up.
Why is this one so different?
Well, I learned something very special
During our time together:
Everyone is going to hurt you sooner or later,
You just have to decide who is worth the pain.
You were definitely worth it.
I’ve just been trying to get through the pain.
I started crying myself to sleep at night;
It’s my lullaby.
Don’t worry about me,
Time heals all wounds,
Or so I’ve been told.
But always remember:
I’ll never forget you…
I love you
I want you
I need you
[[Too bad you don't speak Spanish]]
The reason this is in spanish, is because she gave it to them in spanish so that they had no clue what she was saying, that way, they wouldn't know what she was really feeling and all the emotional pain it caused her. and i know it sounds like they already broke up, but this is the note she gives him to break up with him because she knows she's not the right one for him even if she loved him.
"How can i stop crying when the only one who can make me stop is the one who made me start."
--Missa
A contest entry
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Comments
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Thank you for the translation, while I'm trying to learn spanish I haven't gotten very far with it...
This is very sad and very deep, I've read a lot of break-up poetry in the last couple days but this is by far one of the better peices. Very well done. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. -
Beautiful either way.
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I think I may have found my second favorite piece of work yet on ap!!! wow this was so beautiful! my first is a song from my baby. . . but I think I will read this over and over and over its so touching and deep... very amazing and talented pen.. "write on"
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This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL work!!!!!
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wow, I luv it! thanx 4 entering.
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well done
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I loved this poem...cleverly done...and thankyou for
dearly for the translation.
it spoke of the reality of love and battles of argument..
and your author notes shone through heartbreakingly.
Sometimes, time is needed....so we can long...and
forgive, and remember past the arguments of friendships
once shared and enjoyed!
great write!
thankyou for your entry!
loved it!
ears/Seattle
welcome to the finalist list!
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"who is worth the pain."
damn! what a question...
the entire Spanish thing was brilliant.
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Beautiful
This was really good!! Loved the whole idea about it being in spanish so others wouldn't be able to feel what she was feeling. Great job!! Thanks for entering and good luck!!
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this is veryy good.
I like the creativity of it.
like its put in Spanish because she's scared to tell him how she feels.
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That's super Pretty.
nice job<3
And, I can read spanish...So it was nice in both.
<3
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this is so beautiful, and thanks for the translation, I don't speak spanish
this was a really unique idea, and with the explanation, it was mega sad, but really lovely.
thanks for entering.
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Aw thats beautiful but really sad. Thanks for the translation! My Spanish is still a bit off :{ great poem!
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I must admit it's a brilliant idea for a poem, with such a unique twist at the end. I'm not sure it's what I was looking for, but all the same, I love the poem itself.
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Thanks for entering.
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OMG!
i absolutely adored this..
and at first i was huh because it was in spanish and i smiled because i was thinking omg i know i can't read this.
All in all this was wonderful and i could read it over and over again.
I loved it.
Good luck in the contest.
-Mandi
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It’s my lullaby.
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Thanks for putting your option # in the AN. I appreciate it. You did a good thing when you translated it to English cuz I can't read spanish. This is a vary emotional poem and you followed the prompt by using the letter. Good job. Thanks for joining this contest.
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Wow , beautifully done!
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This is really great, congratulations on all your prior wins with this. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Good luck
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Hehe pleased you traslated or I wouldn't have had a clue. Beautifully penned, good luck
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i wanna cry...i really do...this is purely beautiful. thankies so much for entering hun...wow is all i have to say
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Very Good
Don’t worry about me,
Time heals all wounds,
Or so I’ve been told.
But always remember:
I’ll never forget you…
Your Authors Notes were interesting
I thank you that I was able to read this
Very Nice
Rick
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it
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The end of something once beautiful
There's such a feeling of loss here, "We had our fair share of fights----Why is this one so different" and "I particularly loved "Everyone is going to hurt you------You were definitely worth it"
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lol first I read this and I was like WHAAAT? lol XD the ending line was funny made me laugh but then i couldnt comment because I dont know spanish at all thank you for the translation!!
I love the piece, especially the first two lines. there is so mcuh love and heartbreak within your lines and I love the way you fit them together to create this beautiful piece. it's just simply beautiful.
&& of course.
good lucks to you from all of us!! thank you for entering
-checkmate♥
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WoW that's deep! lol...just read over it again and it hit me....WAY GOOD... lol
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oh i already knew spanish. It's a pretty good poem. lol. Interesting perspective and well it's just different lol. Good luck in the contest
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haha thanks!
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Muoy bien! I really enjoyed this. It was fun to read and thanks for the translation. I don't know too many spanish words at all. Thanks for entering and good luck
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lol I was getting ready to write something about how evil spanish speakers I take French lol
This is a beatiful poem with such great feeling. Great job and good luck in the contest!
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My gusta como esta en los dos lenguages. Me gusta mas en esp. Gracias po la entrada.
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mucho gracias!
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Aw
Ever so beautiful indeed. I love it!
Though, i'm not too keen to spanish. (I've failed it twice!) This was great.
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haha i used a traslator lol
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Sweet
This poem brings back memories that i've forgotten but the other way round of course.
"You just have to decide who is worth the pain.
You were definitely worth it
I’ve just been trying to get through the pain.
I started crying myself to sleep"
I like these lines,
Good Write
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I definitely got a little worried when i saw only Spanish!! I feel you!! every word was a reminder of my heart-breaker lol
You just have to decide who is worth the pain.
You were definitely worth it.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Make me cry why don't you!!!! lol thank you. I loved those lines!
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Whew!!! Thank goodness you included the English verson. I was a bit worried there for a moment. This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed it very much. Good luck.
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This was awesome
Thankyou for having both languages it is most appreciated .Yes love of the heart often takes time to heal and we all hold pieces of those we love always . The heart is one also that can find new love when one is lost . It adapts and moves on in time and brings life and joy back to those hurting . You have done very well with this and I hope we can talk often
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