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Hand of an Angel ( HM )

 

 

 

She came to me in a dream,

Over the Emerald Oceans,

and the skies of Sapphire blue.

 

Flowers blossoming in a garden full in bloom,

Orchids dancing in planters,

Sung to the sun-rays on that Summer's day.

 

Hand of friendship,

Warmth of glow,

and a smile that launched the ships in sail.

 

Softly spoken words,

Of encouragement,

As my brittle walls crumbled into powdered ashes scattering on the floor.

 

Written daily messages,

Etched in black and white,

Always ending with a hug that sealed the stamp within an open heart.

 

You are my Guardian Angel...

 

 

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With love and thank you xxx

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    July 22, 2008
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    "As my brittle walls crumbled into powdered ashes scattering on the floor."

    Nice!


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    aww, wow, so beautiful and such heartfelt words, an amazing piece hun. xxx

  • imahealer
    July 16, 2008

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    Sigh... with a friend like this who will listen and always be there, you have sealed the distance of friendship! This is how I think of you!!! It is like my fingers are typing this poem. Bless her for always holding your hand. My lovely lady, best wishes in this contest! Tear jerker for sure!
    Love,

    Linda


  • Age of Rain
    July 16, 2008

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    Oh wow. Your beauty never fails to amaze. This piece nearly made me cry. It was just so incredible. LOVE it!


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 16, 2008

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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL LADY!

    Thanks for sharing this fine piece with me, Julie - and GOOD LUCK in this contest with it! As I write often of the sea - as I've been doing with my latest pieces for my 33rd book - and of flowers, gardens, and angels, too - this was a piece that I TRULY enjoyed with all me heart and soul!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 16, 2008

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    Stunning piece of writing here. It is very very beautiful indeed. Your emotion and imagery really stand out in this piece Julie. Good luck in the contest.

    Dark
    Lvoe
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • daviscth silver member
    July 16, 2008
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    What a wonderful heart felt poem sis!! It's just perfect for this contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 16, 2008

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    wow this is stunningly beautiful julie it realy touchs the readers heart and soul every word as precius as the next Over the Emerald Oceans,and the skies of Sapphire blue.Hand of friendship,Warmth of glow,and a smile that launched the ships in sail.Always ending with a hug that sealed the stamp within an open heart.You are my Guardian Angel good luck in the contest my friend marina


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    Oh how sweet and loving this is

    I truly embraces my heart through this love we all should learn and share .Together we hug each ther everyday and wish love and happiness .At times we hold each other up and bring faith and the ability to move forward and see the light ahead .Thankyou ever so much honey and I hope you know I love you with all my heart .

    • Reptile Lady gold member
      July 29, 2008
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      thank you so much for the HM
      I really wanted to tell you just how much you mean to me hun
      You are my Guardian Angel and love you x


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    this is so beautiful Mum. I love it so much. your words paint a wondrous picture. like that of an artist who paints on a canvas.. words written from your heart, which is so full of love..

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • MysticalRayne
    July 16, 2008

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    Awwwww this is wonderful I really enjoyed this best of luck in the contest


  • angelcalled666
    July 16, 2008

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    Oh my.

    Honest. This is effin awesome.
    Always ending with a hug that sealed the stamp within an open heart.

    I love that.
    Idk what it is.
    Its like.
    Just, blows my mind, really.

    great job.

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