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Inner workings...

At times, this place gives comfort
Soul is rested,
staying within peaceful state


Yet, with the sweep of a broom…


change of attitude,
tempted
into my dark dimensions,

‘She speaks’ and I listen…

Entertaining demented ideas,
drunk on unrestrained
epinephrine, everything swirls
and clouds rage war
in littlest of spaces

~

 

…I scream

my liberation from ultimate
turmoil
Still, regretting

this will all 
                    come again…




Author notes

3: write something really dark that it will make me feel it
4: Write about what the word pain stands for you



This isn't nessicarily my pain...it's my pain ellaborated on...so as to give you something DARK

and Nooooo, no one close to me worry...it's not how I'm feeling lol
just a contest write

~Definitions of epinephrin:
noun: a catecholamine secreted by the adrenal medulla in response to stress (trade name Adrenalin); stimulates autonomic nerve action ~

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    Wow!

    Love this hun, intense piece. I like the use of 'epinephrine' not found often but works so well here. Gorgeous write my light...certainly found your shadow here Good luck


  • mato
    July 16, 2008

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    Great write

    I love the flow of this and the emotion. Amazing how you can write about something that you are not feeling at the moment