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Late AGAIN a poem through Mrs. Craw's eyes!

So I was walking to school
And I saw a fool
It was Charline
Hyped on caffeine

Then he said with an utter most grace "What's up Mrs. Craw?"
So I said "Awe"
How dare he suck up to me!
He is for one an absentee

So I got so mad! I started to hop!
I just couldn't stop!
I jumped right into his SUV!
And then he stared at me like I was Eddy Murphy!

He then said "I finally see!
I guess I really am an absentee!"
I said "You were only late 142 times!"
And dear me that bell started to chime!

I got out my note book and I wrote

I here by DEMOTE
Mrs. Craw for being THE worst secretary
In the UNIVERSE of secretaryship!
Mrs. Craw will now be a JANITOR 24/7 and will clean up THE worst messes
that NOBODY wants to clean up!
 

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Please compare to "late once again!A poem through Charline's eyes!" http://allpoetry.com/poem/4427033

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  • Foofy
    October 10
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    lurve it!


  • Mr.
    June 7
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    funny

  • Foofy
    February 3
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    I love it!!!

    It's really funny!!!


  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    November 30, 2008
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    I messed up on celeste turkey one!


  • Tyl3r
    October 21, 2008
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    Wha?


  • EiramDK
    October 20, 2008

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    HAHAHA

    MY teacher should be condemmed to being a janitor on minimum wage for the REST OF ETERNITY! Oh yeah, good poem! It was awesomness.


  • joee-143
    October 4, 2008
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    lol

    this is awesome lol


  • addicted
    September 26, 2008

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    uhhhhhhhhhhh......OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOK? like that made no sence,but it made me laugh

    -"i started to hop
    and i couldent stop!'

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

    funny funny funny (if u were or waznt tryin,ya wer!)


    • SmartBrick
      September 28, 2008
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      Yeah!It might help if you read the other poem on the link,if you haven't done that yet.And I wasn't trying to be,it just came out that way...It always seems to roll that way!


  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    July 16, 2008
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    I don't get why she wrote:
    "I here by DEMOTE
    Mrs. Craw for being THE worst secretary
    In the UNIVERSE of secretaryship!
    Mrs. Craw will now be a JANITOR 24/7 and will clean up THE worst messes
    that NOBODY wants to clean up!"
    about herself in her own note book!


    • SmartBrick
      July 18, 2008
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      She wrote it in her OWN notebook because she's in charge of all the demotions and promotions.So she had to write it so it was final.Thank you for you reply!


  • silent pain17
    July 16, 2008
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    lol that's funny

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