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Light Filters Through

......................................................................sun  

Mist lifts at last, light filters through
all walls dividing conscious dreams.
Morn drawn this moment magic seems.
Imagination's overview
patterns swirl-whirls to review
renewal of recurrent themes.
Light filters through and brightly beams
across Time, space, in curlicue,
here surfaced, there hid, surfs anew,
as insight offers partial gleams
if not of Destiny's deep schemes
at least a partial glimpse or two
lending sense to interplays,
kindling hope all care allays.

Author notes

Option 4 Dawn Background : http://flickr.com/photos/algo/148280826/
Animated Sun
http://photobucket.com/image/animated%20sun/EnH_bucket/Animated%20Tiles/sun.gif?o=6

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Comments


  • ConvenientExcuses
    July 17

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    Excellent. This is exactly the kind of poetry I was looking for when I created option 4. Well done! Thanks for entering and good luck!

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 16

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    Ooohhh...


  • NurseyPoo
    July 16

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    Very good. I enjoyed the feel of this write. Your background is beautiful but makes it hard to read in places. But you can forget that when you use beautiful words that way. Pen on...

    . Rewarded 4