A portal you will find
where mere mortals can gaze
through a passage for mankind
to an underworld ablaze.
But please just keep in mind
this door works both ways.
Author notes
30 word quickie picture prompt
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE PHOTO PROMPT 10 POETS 30 WORDS by Roaddog Wolf.
575 points, ended July 17, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems About Hell by Michael H..
500 points, ended August 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ha ha
nice write for the prompt . . liked "to an underworld ablaze" and "this door works both ways" . . congrats on the gold
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Great take on the picture. I really like your last line....shivery good!!!
Lady Dragonwyck
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Congratulations on the gold, this was so well deserved...and I still love it!
Sue -
perfect! What more could you possibly have done ith 30 words and this picture? Nothing, its perfect. lol.
no surprise this took gold. congrats!
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Oh yes this is a marvelous write excellent rhyme flow and meaning very well written
good luck in the contest and thank you for your entry
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I really like how you took this prompt and made it your own! Excellent poem! best of luck in the contest!
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A great 30 words written to the prompt...dark and foreboding...love it
All the best...Sue
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This is very cool indeed.
Well done.
Samuel
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