The yelling has ended-forever now,
her pain has ended, though she swore that
he wasn't good enough.
Look what he did to her,
she's unreconizable now.
He beat her, he hated her-
now he's murdered her.
She wanted to leave him,
he'd put her through so much agony,
he wouldn't let her go.
The flames of agony so hot they burn,
the only ghosts of that place,
and they tell her story.
Author notes
Picture number 4. Credit to the website photobucket.com
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt by xXDarkChildXx.
900 points, ended July 16, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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What do you think? Anything I can work on?
Comments
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This is awesome! I loved the flow, and the imagery was amazing. Thanks so much for entering, best of luck!
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Oh... my. I loved this poem. I always love poems like this! It semi... reminds me of things, I'm not gonna talk about. Thanks for entering, I just loved this poem. Great look on the picture.
Keep at it!
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