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mission code-x 360 degrees

Oozing with confidence, fightin' impediments
and elements of pure evil,
driven straight to us as we stand firm and erect!
Like soldiers, carving our way forward
despite this sickening rhythm of ribaldry!!
While the sick sons of darkness, try to keep in harness,
their ill plans, they kill clans, in gory pants!!
Brothers and sisters cruelly gnashing them teeth,
stampin' them feet, while others are tastin' defeat.
Blood boiling, bliss burried, bosoms bleeding, hearts exposed!!
Death toll of conscious mindsets, rapidly risin',
consciousness seized, handcuffed in chains
and thrown in a deep dark dirty dungeon!!
Toxic doctrines let loose, as Sons of Light choose
not to intoxicate their sytems with booze,
escapin' the noose, all hell breaks loose
as hellish hounds, hungry, hunting the Holy Sons of Light
combin' heaven and earth, a desperate evil act
for they will never get to conquer the lions...

It's BCM CodeX360 degrees
Everyone's knees at 90 degrees
Survival of the fittest
Don't you test us
It's our time...
It's BCM CodeX360 degrees
Everyone's knees at 90 degrees
Survival of the fittest
Y' all detesters but
It's our time...

At university, our destiny's portentously conceived!
Greasing their behinds(arses) with sweet words they believed,
that we'll feed, in their heathen, self-destructive dishes.
Some people callin' us the campus "50 Cents", "Dreamers", and the sort.
Unconscious of Last Emperor's words of great poetic wisdom
and I quote: "Imagination is the fabric of life!!"
With my words, sharp as a Samurai's sword, I can take life,
but I choose to bring forth life, by resurrecting all those spiritually dead.
See the red, in my wristlet represents the passion within!
The passion to win!! Passion to inspire positive changes,
breaking the shackles of evil,
and bring your mindsets out of the devil's cages!!
See, the pages I ink these words on,
understands not the anger expressed in this song;
but they can feel the vivacious movement of this black man's black pen!!
As I've said, some people believe we're a cataclysmic movement
leadin' gullible people astray with song, like the Pied Piper!! Nonsense!!
Don't you see that such individuals are confused?!
Gabblin' and prattlin' all kinds of puerile statements, clearly confused!!
I refuse to let you believe, for once
that BCM's doin' this for any of your Modoc reasons,
but the time is ours now, this is our season!!

It's BCM CodeX360 degrees
Everyone's knees at 90 degrees
Survival of the fittest
Don't you test us
It's our time...
It's BCM CodeX360 degrees
Everyone's knees at 90 degrees
Survival of the fittest
Y' all detesters but
It's our time...

I bet y'all don't know the power of word!
Whether written or spoken, it can bring a grown man to his knees.
It can cause hardened soldiers to weep like sisies,
while cowards lose fear and choose to cheer,
facing them hideous challenges head-on!
Well, maybe you've heard the sayin' that goes:"Pen is mightier than sword!"
That's because with words, one can paint abysmal portraits in a romantic way!
Vice-versa!! Detesters of good!! Cursers of holiness!!
This songs is meant to inspire good a change of mindset.
A song conceived in the heart! Concealed in the mind!
Ejaculated through the tongue! A song of deliverance!
Delivering you from the unGodly mind,
that makes you curse the good that is done,
by the Sons and Daughters of Light!!
Abba Ben Ammi Ben Israel once said:
"Giving honour to a great man increase your respect.
For the greater your teacher, the greater you become!!"
So how come, are we faced with your ceaseless mockery?
You'd better appreciate the positive messages we bring.

It's BCM CodeX360 degrees
Everyone's knees at 90 degrees
Survival of the fittest
Don't you test us
It's our time...
It's BCM CodeX360 degrees
Everyone's knees at 90 degrees
Survival of the fittest
Y' all detesters but
It's our time...


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  • Jay2jay
    July 28

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    To those who only read this, you cannot call this perfect till
    you hear the flow

    Yo skill, my knees have been 90 degrees for long.
    May I stand parallel please.


  • Aurielle
    September 26, 2008

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    despite this sickening rhythm of ribaldry!!
    While the sick sons of darknessDeath toll of conscious mindsets, rapidly risin',
    consciousness seized, handcuffed in chains
    and thrown in a deep dark dirty dungeon!!


    wow this was long! I love the way you expressed your topic. It was clear and so was the imagery which is the master of poetry... That line deep dark dungeon I love kinda alliteration going on with the dark and dungeon but the deep seems like a baby way and so does dark. Perhaps dim dreary


    This was well written and the effort the voice was there. The emotions and sincerity was very powerfull. This poem was vry loud


  • Freestyle Bushido
    July 21, 2008

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    i like these lines here:

    "Giving honour to a great man increase your respect.
    For the greater your teacher, the greater you become!!"
    So how come, are we faced with your ceaseless mockery?