At dinner
you spoke 85 words
Only 3 stood out
I picked them up
and swallowed
like a god
to erase the taste
of your home-made soup
Author notes
She's getting better at cooking.
Thank the Gods.
A contest entry
- 30 words... by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 17, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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let's hope so, i want to stop by for some dindin.
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LOL - very cleverly done and congrats
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at least it's homemade and at least there were three.
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lmao...sounds like my next ex wife..lol
this is good
best wishes
peace muddy
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Funny. This one was about an ex too. (grin)
Thanks man. Appreciate it.
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This really rocks.
Best of luck.
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed.
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No problem.
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