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I'm Sorry

I'm sorry I cried,
I'm sorry I sweared.
I'm sorry I love you,
I'm sorry I cared.

I'm sorry for speaking,
I'm sorry for not.
I'm sorry for listening,
I'm sorry I forgot.

I'm sorry for taking,
I'm sorry for giving.
I'm sorry for breathing,
I'm sorry for living.

I'm sorry I wanted,
I'm sorry it was you.
I'm sorry for writing this,
I'm sorry for what I do.

I'm sorry for everything,
And this I hold as true:
Of all the things I'm sorry for,
I'm sorry I met you.

Author notes

Two-year-old poem...
I hate my old sense of rhythm (or...lack thereof?).

AN: Tears-You-Bleed [without the hyphens]

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  • fromzerotonothing
    July 18, 2008
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    LIXIRIFIC!!!!

    this is amazing.... specially the ending.... awesome~!