Silent as the dead
Held forever in eternal sleep
Will you be my prince?
Give me a voice?
Because I want to wake up
And I’m sick of being silent
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Sleeping Beauty allusion, hidden in there... Find it...
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Silence, alot of images conjure in my mind at silence, how sometimes it is good and bad. And you certainly shouldnt be silent. Speak up!
Good luck and thank you for entering.
Kindest of regards
Sophie
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awww this one was nice
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I feel the same way. You capture the sadness of being invisible so well. Best to you in the contest
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I really really like it.
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nice! its short and i like short poems! thax for entering!!!!!
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this is a good poem, I like the theme
it showed true emotion and raw pain
thanks for entering all my love
kitty xxx -
well done
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very different very nice god luck to you in the contest
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