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Eternal Unity

Ancient echos,
distant dreams,
on wings of night
in star-lit streams,
summon spirits,
to the light,
binding lovers
once departed,
and yet to be,
in eternal
unity

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  • wendymolly
    July 16, 2008

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    a genuine flow. I love your thoughts of imagery here, reminds me so much of Tucson, Az. These are the kind of words that make me want to be a better writer!
    take care always,
    ~PitHyAplomB.