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Who?

I used to know
who I was
a colleague a friend
a husband, a Dad.

And then I didn't know any more.



Author notes

Prompt:-
...who are you? Really?

free verse
40 words max

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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Comments

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  • pops
    July 29
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    Well done Silver.

    But what changed, you or you?


  • Sailor Ptolema gold member
    July 27

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    You are so good at free verse Jeff

    -With you last line; I felt like I just dove off a high-dive into a deep pool, and just kept going deeper. Simply powerful.

    bravo!

    - ~Meg

  • Thomas Scott gold member
    July 16
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    Damn.

    It happens just like this and you couldn't have revealed it more truly, more succinctly.
    Luvit!


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 16

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    You're still you always will be


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 16

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    Mmmmm you are still all those things even if you're not Oh now I don't make any sense either!!!

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