Oh! What Dreams I Hold Dear!

Standing on the precipice of a chasm

of lucid imaginings, I step off

into a vibrant stream

of consciousness that carries me along

with the ethereal melodies

of an altered reality that beckons.

Pulsing notes beat in time

with my heart, dancing

as my mind displays surreal vistas

that yearn to be explored.

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Option #5

6. Oh! What Dreams I Hold Dear!

- 7 Fantastic Options - by xxRainbowDawnxx. 1050 points, ended July 25, 2008, 15 entries
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xxRainbowDawnxx
July 25, 2008

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Oh this contest is not proving easy to judge, so many wonderful entries! So expressive, I love your word choice and how you really captivate me with your expressions. Also adore the picture you have accompanied this piece with.
Avendesora Dreamer
July 24, 2008

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I love that you don't fear your dreams...I have to admit that I do, sometimes, like they might reveal things I'd rather not know...but you...you make me want to rethink that...I want to go exploring
forbiddenpriest
July 19, 2008
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The first line plummets me into this write. A genuinely good piece. Love it.
Margaret Denham
July 17, 2008

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The beauty and simplicity of your words touched me.

Best wishes in the contest dear.

Love Margaret
fortyninereasons
July 16, 2008

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What beautiful words you have penned here, I do love the picture you have added. They compliment each other. Sometimes I think we would all like to be able to step into our dreams and make them our reality. Juls
Cannonsfire
July 16, 2008

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Dreams are such nice things to hold on to and some even come true Love, C