Mummy Mummy,
I have something to tell you.
What do you mean you're too
busy getting ready for work?
Why does Uncle Graeme have to baby sit me?
He hurts me Mummy.
I'm not lying Mummy!
Why don't you believe me?
Can't I come with you?
Is it normal for him to hurt me how he does?
Im not making things up, Mummy!
I do want you to work,
so I can go to school
But why does he have to watch me?
Have a good day at work, Mummy.
I love you, Mummy.
He hurt me too much today, Mummy...
You can't save me now.
Author notes
Option 1.
Didn't really have long enough to explain but basically Mum works and the young girls Uncle baby sits her and abuses her but this day he goes a little too far and she goes to Heaven..
xx
A contest entry
- can you hear..? by Lil-Bit Crazy.
600 points, ended July 16, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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wow, such a painful write made me cry i know how it is for someone to abuse you... and this made me cry great write
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this poem is so sad with the way its written from a child's perspective, and the way it ended
keira
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this is a cool poem. its sad and sounds desperate for love and attention. very good, i like your wording
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you sholdn say hope you enjoyed on a subject like this.... its just sooo well wrong..... i know you prolly didnt mean anything by it but still i would remove it....
as for the poem you did a great job... thank you for entering and good luck...
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