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Delectable Optimism

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tasting the omelet
of available ingredients,
add spices and herbs
of your dedication
till it accentuates
to your desired taste.


Witness the unripened
yellow fruits of endeavors,
as they mature under
time's vividness.


A bonus of lemon muffins
shall be presented before you
to please your sweet-tooth
of contentment.







 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Yellow

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  • Flowergirl
    September 28, 2008
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    great write i loved it


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    What an amazing metaphor this is. You managed to do this with such expertise. Very cleverly and richly penned indeed.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene