If grass was yellow instead of green
and the sun was green, would we all turn mean?
If lemons were blue
could our taste buds be confused, too?
And would we then miss the 'ribbon round the old oak tree'
if it were not yellow for us to see.
Author notes
Prompt: Yellow...50 words or less...I have often wondered if things were different colours especially foods, would they taste different...and would Dorothy have got lost without a bright yellow path to follow in Oz? ...good luck all
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A contest entry
- Yellow by AliceinPoetryLand.
950 points, ended July 16, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful
Very well expressed. A terrific write. Best of luck in the contest.
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Aww this is just gorgeous! You have managed to pack so much into your words. Thanks so much for your beautiful entry.
Gaylene
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