You...
Shadows triumphant in the unseen
A light, cast upon the forest to which darkness has claimed
Bend and refract.
Shadows wither into the hollows
Morning fire claimes her victory again.
Me..
(Curled upon the floor
He is unknown.
Innocence stolen
He has seen more than the frail mind can contain.
Confined to the shadows from which he came
Until freedom rains upon him.)
One.
A beam pierces the window and he is awoken.
Blue canvas crashes the green backdrop
Gratefully, he takes it in.
He is known
Glowing in his eyes, she drives the shadows away.
They are one.
Author notes
"alexparrish"
Two lives are joined at Young Place...
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A contest entry
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Comments
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Wow. Nice write!
Truly fantastic -
I loved your word usage, your spacing method, and the whole concept and idea of this poem!
It was perfect.
I don;t really have any harsh criticism for you! -
"Shadows triumphant in the unseen
A light, cast upon the forest to which darkness has claimed
Bend and refract"
Beautiful word choice throughout the whole poem, but espeically these three lines they really stuck out to me. Wonderful poem, it really is, kinda a nice turn at the end. Really good job.
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wow. i loved it. the way they become one chasing the shadows away. its beautifuly written.
*HUGS* TAY.
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