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Ghetto Depot (( Neo Soul Poetry ))

Ghetto Depot ( Neo Soul Poetry )

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

As I have taken a nap on style

And the hood of Schlitter Bahn Park

Water thoughts has a security of and identity

Theft speed chase.

 

The city of anger of lullaby destruction

Is a supplement of literacy miscommunication of

I, the people. Are we the sea of draught? Or have we

Lost the curious count and got lost in a world where no one

Knows when to put the lights out on knowledge word soul

And let turmoil of past be fuel burning gas or a gesture by past.

 

May I laugh,

Loudly to the downy

Part of resurrection of dear world

I am far from soft

And the loft area I live in

Is the sin of being brown skin shackle

Border line tackled with snapping fingers just,

Crackling,

Ejaculating,

Open up please!

 

The deeds of words I bleed

Is sneezing tissue of lets address

The issue of I am classified

News paper neo ghetto

With a mentality of a male fellow

With duck your head low

Because I’ve come prepared to

Throw word elbows and step

On the weakling toes of I am prose.

 

When I speak soul its from the

Blood line of Herbert Lee

And I will be bumping soul

Until it kills me but I am

The meningitis of silence to

Why my sister of beautiful soul

Or Why my brother of African

Built bones let the silent color

Clone you and you smile and condone

In this fucked up zone as its over with and done?

 

They hung you then and there’re tapping on

Your virgin ass right now but I plow

In raw anger and chain feelings with verbal saw.

And I sweet up you little weak minded bitches with Cole slaw

And stir you in tar destruction because my mustard

Is limited and I been tight flow since way back. So

I will save you the embarrassment and

walk off the stage of your mind with my hat tilted

To the back.

 

 

Neo Soul Poetry Artist

Julia L. Clark

 

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Ghetto Depot ( Neo Soul Poetry )

My style of writing with a little of word battle.
No need to explain me because my definition
Does that quite well. Love you for reading
Lady Juke Joint Jewels



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  • CaptainRedd
    July 23
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    Whoa, dude! That was pure genius! The message was great and your word choice was sheer pleasure! I've read some great poetry, but I'm not sure if it "measures up" to what you've done with this! I enjoyed every line of this piece; I definitely need to read more of your work!!


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    July 17

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    Shiiiiiit!!! Talk that shit girl i love it
    My favorite "stir you in tar destruction" Tear some shit up ma


  • Ephiphany
    July 16

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    Okaaaayyyyy

    Now this is what's up, Love the ending was tha BOMB

    Gurl you are definately a mess, and I'm loving it
    Keep doin you, it's a pleasure to read all of your many creations...I'm diggin the Border too

    Great job!

    BossLady


  • darell
    July 16
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    Slammmin!

    Gooooooooooooooooo girl! Snap Crackle and Pop!


  • Swangrnv
    July 16

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    Damn!

    A smack that BEE-OTCH UPSIDE THEY HEAD PIECE! Love the flow, hostility and story as a whole! good one jewels!

    • look at you there itsn't no hostility in this piece knuckle head none at all it was free write okay sorry if i gave the wrong impression other wise okay
  • nasty nice julia this had a lot of great style to it as always

    Niree


  • kennethlaney
    July 16
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    Very Good

  • the steam of this piece i like how you can make things so funny like this In raw anger and chain feelings with verbal saw.

    And I sweet up you little weak minded bitches with Cole slaw. You sound like a female madame pimp almost You sure you was born a male and had a sex chain this was like a chew and spit you out piece nice mommy


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    July 16

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    I loved it!

    It just fills my soul with hope when I hear a spirit
    such as this...raise their soulful voice...to say
    enough is absolutely enough already!

    I went to my father's adult family home where he can
    receive 24 hour nurses care..which i cannot provide.
    and many of the seniors who have worked so hard all their
    lives are facing the "donut hole" of prescription
    coverage despite being insured...their prescripts. are
    $600.00-$825.00 extra per month!
    I've been battling bureacracy trying to remind them
    that these are humans..
    so yes..i enjoyed this poem..it gave me a moments soulful
    breath and relief!
    thankyou for the courage it took to write this powerful
    poem indeed!
    ears/Seattle


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 16

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    This is great!
    In raw anger and chain feelings with verbal saw.

    And I sweet up you little weak minded bitches with Cole slaw

    Love it!!!

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