She
knows that her
HEAVEN is in her own hands.
LOCKED, the bedroom door, a portal to her piece of nirvana.
SECRETS stay here.
TEASING,
VIBRATIONS taunt her.
CALLING out to her softly, "Come and play, you naughty girl."
WHISPERS start to dance as she closes her eyes.
Oh, dear God.
Passion completely lost his temper,
and her world is quaking.
Finally, the gates open...
Author notes
That tickles
Option 7
Write me a poem in a new form I have created.
I have not came up with a name for it, but if you have ideas, do state.
Line 1 - 1 syllable
Line 2 - 3 syllables
Line 3 - 7 syllables
Line 4 - 15 syllables
Line 5 - 4 syllables
Line 6 - 2 syllables
Line 7 - 6 syllables
Line 8 - 14 syllables
Line 9 - 11 syllables
Line 10 - 3 syllables
Line 11 - 9 syllables
Line 12 - 6 syllables
Line 13 - 7 syllables
I also used the word bank in option #4...heaven, locked, secrets, teasing, vibrations, calling, and whispers...and temper, but not at the beginning of a line...Hope you enjoy!
In a list
A contest entry
- - 7 Fantastic Options - by xxRainbowDawnxx.
1050 points, ended July 25, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hmmm, I like the way you mixed options...used some very expressive words here and I like how you incorporated the words into the form. Very intense.
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I'll have to try this. Um...that new form for a poem of course!
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HOT SHIT! i think i need to go have a cigarette. no , but really this piece is off the hook too. i love it love it! and great use of them words!!!!
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