I rise and fall
in your ocean of love
you leave me drowning
gasping for air
only to rescue me
in my time of distress
your love is so...
unpredictable
Author notes
30 Words or less
Open Prompt
A contest entry
- 30 words... by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 17, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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were women unpredictable is our fortay (sorry cant spell)
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very nice
I see you still do the romantic pieces well! l.o.l. lots of luck my friend in the contest!
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hey! i love the up and down emotions this one put me through!!!! so true, though...how love can pull you in all directions like that!
hope you're well, bro!
love,
sis'r
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Wow, nothing better than unpredictable and crazy love!
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