A soul, lost,
Somewhere in the darkness;
Only hints of what used to be remains.
An existence scattered among the glutton hearts;
It pleads for a chance to be free.
Author notes
30 words of the 30 Max
In a list
A contest entry
- 30 words... by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 17, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honesty always appreciated
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Aww.. so sad.. a feeling many of us feel tho! Oh to be free...
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Powerful,
You know my thoughts are with you as well!
Know you are a blessing, and loved!
Excellent expressed and emotionally charged piece!
Bravo, and puppy loves ya so.
and a rose.
-poetic pup~ 
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wowzzz.
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