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Uncertain Outcome

Soft vibrations, tickle my ear,
as you lean close and whisper.

Temper, recedes, I smile.
My lips, calling yours.

Interlocking tongues,
bitter, sweet kiss.

Heaven in your touch,
I sigh, resigned.

Bracketing our love,
again, in secret.

Hearts locked in turmoil,
lives, emotions, teased.

Sometimes, I just want to rewind,
fast forward, capture outcome.

Will I be your sweet seniorita?
Will I sing our children lullabies?

Or does our script keep us cheating?
Either way, it will be a grand finale...
...won't it?




Author notes

1. vibrations 2. whisper3. temper4. calling
5. interlock6. bitter7. heaven 8. sigh 9. bracket 10. secret
11. locked 12. teased 13. rewind 14. captivate 15. seniorita 16. lullaby 17. script 18. finale
14...used capture
Thanks...love word banks...this one was tough! lol

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  • Ken-Maverick
    July 28, 2008

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    You brought forth memories in this write

    "Hearts locked in turmoil,
    lives, emotions, teased."

    Feelings hard to forget


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 25, 2008

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    Sounds like the perfect connection between to loving persons, very sweet and expressive. I love wordbanks too, though some are very hard to incorporate, you are right!


  • aboomer silver member
    July 16, 2008

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    Well, for having to use a word bank - I think you did a great job with this!!!
    best wishes in your contest.