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Flying High

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Each flight is different;
clouds vary
ground changes
I sometimes doze.

Yet the expansive sky
is filled with air
that lifts us up, giving to all
a sense of wonderment. 

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  • penman gold member
    August 4, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well expressed. Such a great take on the picture. Thank you for sharing.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    July 16, 2008

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    I like what you have done with this, give a floating sense of feeling, good write

    good luck in the contest and thank you for entering


  • crimsondew
    July 16, 2008

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    A wonderful sense of flight conveyed in these words...very well written...All the best in the contest!


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    The picture is so amazingly beautiful,
    it's like looking into heaven WoW I love it.
    I hate flying, but OMG ~~~ what a wonderful sight.
    You have done an great job on this piece.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce