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Sunflowers



Morning dew kissed her check
as she lifted her head to the sun
~smiling,

same as every other morning,
until he drifted across her pages
writing words on the soft breeze
~in yellow,

upon her petals into her very soul
inviting spring fragrances and
love in paper flowers and hope.

A contest entry

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  • Ftw lol
    September 25, 2008
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    Awwwwww its a sunflower poem *blushes* im glad you entered it in my contest *huggles*


  • Nienna Calmcacil
    September 22, 2008

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    I've personally never liked the color yellow, but all of that emotion and beauty you've described makes me respect it a bit more. =)

    Thank you for entering! I enjoyed this piece.


  • HereComesTheSun
    September 8, 2008
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    such a soothing poem very lovely


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Ohhh now I can see why this won gold! Stunning write!! I'm so glad I didn't miss reading it!



  • Grey Mouser
    July 18, 2008

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    Spectacular!

    So very deserving of the reward my dear. A golden light that shined in darkness, lit the way through a fog and pierced the veil that kept two souls seperated from being. Finding that in yellow, beauty shined a changed the outlook of the world. Congratulations on the GOLD!

    Love,
    Mouser
    xoxoxoxoxox
    Sun and stars shine no brighter than you!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    this is so deserving of the gold as it is just simply stunning and creativly written with a deep compassion of emotion. wonderful write


  • BellaD
    July 16, 2008
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    This is so beautiful. Lovely delicate imagery. Congratulations on the Gold.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    Oh this is just truly stunning! I felt so much emotion as I read this. It felt like you poured your soul into this too.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • DolphinLass silver member
    July 16, 2008
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    aww very well written, good luck


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    So very beautiful,
    yellow is lovely color to write about,
    you have done an amazing job on this piece.
    It is so refreshing and sweet.
    I love this hold write. It was delightful
    to read.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

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