I finally decided
to turn my feet around
back-stepping down roads
that once were
enchanted by childhood
I discovered
I didn't miss home
just who I was
then
A contest entry
- 30 words... by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 17, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Gah, I love this!!! (I'm waiting for your muse to give me a really crappy poem, but I guess that never will happen.
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"back-stepping"
Love this.
"enchanted by childhood"
Love this even more...
"Just who I was
then"
Wow, the separation of 'then' into a new line makes SUCH an impact...this is wonderfully written, and best of luck in the contest (:
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wow, amazing the way it is set out and the phrasing tht has been usedd really speaks on a level and makes the reader think about who they are. well done
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Good
I liked this as it makes you think .
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Sometimes being away can help discover whom you really are. Taking risks in life really help develop the character inside.
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