Sing me to sleep
Like he painted my heart over with bright colors
Swoon me with your voice
Like he showered me with gifts
Tell me what I like to hear
Like he lied to me so cunningly
You are just another him.
Trying to pull me away from whats true
I know what I have
I know who is the one
I know who is worth it all
I know better
I know not to fall so easily
I know who will catch me countless times
You are just another him.
I know not to let the "what ifs?" take over
I know not to let my fears get away with me
I know what my answer will eventually be
I know what it has always been
I know better
I know the outcome
You are just another him.
Author notes
I wonder what Lacy is going to think when she reads this....lolz
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Comments
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I dont know what to think.. lmao! cause Im a bit confused.... I read this when you first posted it, but I didnt have a chance to comment until now. hrm..... its still good though!!
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The repetition of "I know" kills this. Do you have anything to say besides that?
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well,the repetition goes with the story and such that is behind this poem, plus I like to use it anyway to get a point across. If you mean that I over did that- I'm sorry...but thank you for your critique. I appreciate it. I don't feel too well at the moment so that may be a reason why i don't want to change or fool with it.
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