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Without

She shared my life
then she was gone.
Now residing only within
the shadows of my dying heart,
stored away forever in the place
where heartaches reside.

A contest entry

Is all hope lost when hearts are abandoned?

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  • Angelflower
    July 15, 2008

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    Shadows can only hide the pain for so long hun.. I would know sad to say.. you did a wonderful job in showing your pain and loneliness in only 30 words.. best of luck..

    Angel


  • Cannonsfire
    July 15, 2008
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    No hope is where another heart finds you and picks you back up to love someone again. C