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Perfect Kiss

I melt into you
.... not able to support myself
.... not able to make sense of the world
.... not able to focus

Heat waves take both of us over
....stripping to cool down
.... blindly caressing
.... fiercly needing

We drown in raw passion
.... sick with urge
.... sick with love
.... sick of waiting

Sweet and sour
.... taste of your warm tongue
.... feel of your velvet lips
.... the humid mist lingering

Reassurance
.... of safety with you
.... of trust within you
.... of the future I crave

Feeling
.... tingles cover me entirely
.... lightheaded and floating
.... burning desire to explode

I melt into you
.... giving you my love
.... giving you my will
.... giving you my all

Every kiss
.... is unforgettable
.... sets my soul on fire
.... is perfect

Author notes

"!!!RAINBOWS AND STUFF!!!"
Option anything goes

I wrote this for a contest about remembering your first perfect kiss, the one that set your soul on fire, the one that you'll never forget- but I postponed writing it for a day due to writers block I guess, anyway the contest closed before I could submit it.

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  • Rock-Junkie
    August 6, 2008
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    wow! havent read this one yet.... but wow! very.. sensualishness. niiice!!