Daffodils woke me this morning,
touching me
from the outside in
I felt them
as the quiet clouds parted
letting in enough light to breathe ~
and all at once
I heard the whispering of 'yellow'
filter through my garden
reading me her poetry of summer...
Author notes
prompt ~ Yellow
A contest entry
- Yellow by AliceinPoetryLand.
950 points, ended July 16, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a pretty write that is s breathtakenly written from the picture. the last line is just stunning and amazing. well done
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Pretty!
Short and sweet! It makes everything seem sunny and cheery. I feel like making lemonade now...
I like the structure you used. It made everything very readable. -
Oh you took this prompt and enriched it so much. Your last line left me breathless! From spring to summer. *sigh* Just beautiful
Thanks so much for your entry.
Gaylene
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