Calculating the benefits
and deducting the costs
I find our relationship
was a mutual loss.
Author notes
15 word quickie
prompt:"Give me back the nothing you took away from me."
A contest entry
- Quickie 10-15-20 by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended July 15, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bring your best PW (5 to 50 words) QUICKY by Meroza.
700 points, ended April 1, 54 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great write.
So simply you explained something like this.
The gold was much deserved.
Swati -
This poem here, this has humor. I adore the take on the prompt and the ending is perfect!
Good luck
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Very powerful and too the point. Great job and congrats on the gold trophy.
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title perfection. 15 words spent wisely. Fantastic.
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so much said in such a short space. Congrads on the gold. Well deserved my friend
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Congratulations on the gold...spot on prompt.
Sue
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Wow
I really, REALLY liked this! Very short and to-the-point. The rhyme seemed very natural. The words you used fit well together. -
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W00t! - that's high praise
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Some relationships just aren't meant to be remembered as a good memory I guess. Nice job here. Love, C
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oooh You did great on the prompt! Best of luck.
Linda
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