Somedays I swear no one is there,
and I've searched for someone to care.
How can you gain love if there is none,
especially when you are down and done.?
I have searched so high and so low,
looking for just one person to show.
Someone who feels real true love,
and even likes when we play rough.
You are lonely and need a friend,
I promise to be there in the end.
I am stronger and then I may look,
and my love is never a crook.
Author notes
to my pal sOuL
A contest entry
- Seeking for someone who will care about me by sOuL.
499 points, ended July 24, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do what you like.. I am not your brain...
Comments
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Aww cute, simple and straight to the point. Nice job with the rhyming terminology and what a sweet dedication I might say
~Emily~ xx
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I have searched so high and so low,
looking for just one person to show.
Someone who feels real true love,
and even likes when we play rough.
Really great
i have enjoyed and liked it sooooooooo much
good luck in contest
and i am happy to know you my friend
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