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slow me down

Drowning in the ocean
only your air saves me.
I float up with you
and I’m okay.
At the surface the bubble pops.
I’m sinking in my tears again.

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  • sighingflosser.
    October 26
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    I’m sinking in my tears again.
    somehow you pulled this off without being cliche.


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 21, 2008
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    short and sweet, thanks good luck


  • aanika
    July 29, 2008

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    Drowning in the ocean
    only your air saves me.

    I’m sinking in my tears again.


    LOVE IT
    LOVELOVE
    ..well u know me and the ocean


  • aanika
    July 18, 2008
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    i love it
    even if you didn't win.
    <3

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