Love is like tides,
With the in and out movement.
Just like tides,
Love has its ins and outs.
You have ins and outs,
Weather guy or girl.
If your a guy,
Girls come in and go out.
If your a girl,
Guys come in and out.
Love is also like waves,
With the up and down movement.
Just like waves,
Love has its ups and downs.
You have ups and downs,
Weather guy or girl.
Guys ups are when,
They have a strong girl.
Girls ups are when,
They have a strong guy.
Love is also like a wave,
Because the wave (Boy/Girlfriend),
Can come down any minite and,
Break your heart in two like a toy boat.
Author notes
Option for contest "Make me want to fall in love (2)" Maybe compare your love to something,nothing too cliche
I don't know what to say about my own poem!
A contest entry
- Make me want to fall in love (2) by Spiritual Soul.
1000 points, ended July 19, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OMG! This is like WAAAAAY different then most of your poems!I liked it though.It was very well written!I loved the line:Break your heart in two like a toy boat.!OMG!That is AWESOME!I also like how you compared us/people to waves!Great work Evil minion 19!
Your Overlord,Confusedperson!
P.s.!If you don't write more WONDERFUL poetry I will be FORCED to take off your head!(J/K!LOL!)♥ -
this is such a beautiufl write sweetie, your stanza's are written with such deep feeling and hope your ok beautiful
xyour ap momx -
this was a great comparison, I loved the last stanza "Break your heart like a toy boat" very creative and different. Thanks so much for your entry!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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