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For Words Sake

“God plays to the fools that play,
and I pray. I tap my head against
this machine, I get no ghost to answer back.
Just windows, I’m not due mirrors
I presume. It would be unhealthy,
It would be sanctimonious.” –J.O.

I reach for a beer
Again
I pull my own
Trigger

Thankful
That it is of
My own hand

Its words
For words sake

Pain
For pains sake

Ancients
Are never whole
And I don’t remember

andWE forget how

I reach into my teacup (ashtray)
And burn myself

Life has fallen
Life stands
Fucking
Right in front
Of my face

I am more
I am so much more less
When I bite this tongue

The air I breathe
Is more thin

I hyperventilate

Fear tingles
On the verge
Of worship

I say no lies anymore
yet I wait
for some substitute

"It's all black babe"
it's what he would say

and I'd make it blue







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  • Jaden silver member
    August 21, 2008
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    Reality bites. It has a stinging vibe.


  • Jersene gold member
    July 20, 2008

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    This has wonderful, not to mention powerful, emotion...but, life feels like this sometimes. I love the lines;

    'Fear tingles
    on the verge
    of worship'

    excellent penning!


  • ArtFullyMe silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    fear on the verge of worship.....damn ...
    yes, and that edge is so close sometimes it's like a lighthouse spinning around saying.... I'm the light take me, but ....something in me always draws back saying, ...like a candle .... you'll go out

    Your words...are still so very much you..



    and every bit as strong...


  • Emmerson
    July 17, 2008

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    Excellent

    I always love a read of yours.. i am not here often anymore but i always check for your new stuff. The last stanza rocks!


  • Balldinger silver member
    July 16, 2008

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    if winter ever comes again, i'm gonna buy a sky-scraper ticket and fly in circles around the needle you seem to secretly insert into the reader's vein. there'll be no further investments in the stock market after reading this piece and chewing for the next century... ~ EZB


  • mtpoet
    July 16, 2008
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    "It's all words babe"
    it's what some would say

    and she'd make it poetry


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    July 15, 2008

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    I can't even begin to tell you how much I relate to you... it's almost scary....


    whisper

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