Our clear blue world remains shrouded in hateful darkness.
A silent night echoes, with fear through many hearts of man.
Dread slices the thoughts of panic stricken minds
Tangled in webs of lies, looming in futures of uncertainty.
A glimmer of light slowly sheds hope bringing forth clarity,
Gradually emerging atop the edges of a newly budding morn.
Truth and wisdom sink into the souls of every being.
Once shackled to shades of consuming false realities,
Now bathed in the knowledge of everlasting sovereignty.
A new dawn arises in all it's crowning glory and
The sweet rays of clarity cleanse the minds of many.
Author notes
Poem by LadyShiva
Option #2 Emerging Horizons
A contest entry
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1700 points, ended July 22, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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A very powerful and thought provoking take on the chosen prompt. Wonderful poetic and deeply intriguing for the worth of its truth.
"Our clear blue world remains shrouded in hateful darkness. "
.. this beginning breath - so very sad, yet true ..
"Once shackled to shades of consuming false realities,
Now bathed in the knowledge of everlasting sovereignty"
Very well spoken piece. Truly poignant. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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thank you so much for taking the time to enter
well done!
best of luck
Tasha
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the horizon of luminosity ... the images here work so well and the form of the write is excellent, like long rays of light. thanks.
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Beautiful take on this prompt my friend!
Well done with this and good luck to you
in this contest!
Jeremy0826
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