You come through the door grab me in your arms
Strip my clothes off throw me upon the bed
Sucking my nipples
Hand reaching below
I grab your dick in my hands
And pull you to my mouth
I take you in sucking teasing with my tongue
Till your ready to explode when you glide down
And take me with all your might
Roaring like a tiger you scream my name
Author notes
Sex. Or lack thereof.
Give it to me like it really is.
None of this "quivering manhood / gentle caress / he unbottons my blouse" kinda crap.
Ten lines or less, because...let's face it... sex rarely lasts long enough to warrant more lines.
Create a story between real people in an honest-to-God moment.
Free verse only.
A contest entry
- Give it to me! by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended August 1, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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Wow Hot but very much I think how the contest runner wants it. Well done
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Sexy
This is so hot my SL
Thank you
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you welcome all for you my SL.......
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wow is getting hot here! damn sis! great job!
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hell yea lets call the fire department lol....
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I like this. Packs a punch in very few words. Your? You're
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Wow. This is an unbelievable write. It is very descriptive and very well done. The title fits excellently.
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Ohhhhhhhhh, what a great take on the prompt! and reminds me of one that was done for me
But we will leave that where it is! hehe. Great job on this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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