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Even The Local Spider Joined In

Oh that little spider we shall call her Tilly you see,
she lived up in the corner of my room  overlooking me.
She started to notice the room stayed dark and quiet,
except for a little whimpering noise at night.

Oh Tilly couldn't stand it for little tears collected on her web,
She had no clean-ex to suck up the little droplet swells.
She knew if she didn't do something her web would melt away,
so she climbed down to the little princes crying one day.

Oh the princes was so unaware and the little spider went crawling right acrost her hair ,
The little princess felt something and bat at hear head with care.
and that little spider jumped with such flair,
Right out on the end of the princesses nose there.

Oh my goodness looking cross eyed she screamed in freight.
And the little spider held her ears for she felt she would die.
Tilly held on to her nose and leaned close to look into her eyes,
and she whispered in a spiders voice YOUR GONNA QUIT CRYING RIGHT!

The little princess nodded her head,
Tilly the spider jumped off onto the bed.
She crawled across the floor and back up the wall ,
to her little spider web but the tears made it fall.

Tilly turned around and headed back her way,
and the little girl started slowly moving away.
Afraid of the little spider but she watched it real close,
then smiled for that little spider on the corner

 of the tissue there wiped her nose.

The moral of the story is don't cry and melt the web of love,
for it's something you have built as you were growing up.
Smile and be happy and the bugs will do the same,
for they cry too when they hear your pain.



Author notes

And the little spider came back down to wipe her littl nose before she started rebuilding her web of love

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  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    July 15, 2008
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    awww bubba i know its u...ur the only 1 who calls me tilly!
    thanks!!
    Love,
    Rayne


  • aboomer silver member
    July 15, 2008
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    What a delightful story! So full of great images and emotion. And I LOVE your last verse,
    'The moral of the story is don't cry and melt the web of love,
    for it's something you have built as you were growing up.
    Smile and be happy and the bugs will do the same,
    for they cry too when they hear your pain'
    best wishes in your contest.