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Worth Fighting for..

Gripping Mother Earth's flesh
Holding tight to withered dreams..
fading into the moon..

Life's beauty abounds in hearts like
Aphrodite's, battling the world..

Feeling Eros embrace

worthy, letting go, reality..

Your touch caresses my skin
Like clouds caress the moon..

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

20-40 words
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  • Slayer gold member
    September 1
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    Another testament to your incredible talent.
    Well done, Angel!

    Slayer


  • jackreed3
    July 21

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    Awsome.... I think that desearverd Gold.... I like your twist in your form... the way it flows through your words... great... talent... JackReed3...


  • samm
    July 16
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    :]]]


  • Lost Vampyre Angel Greeters member
    July 16

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    cant comment too angry and teary might return later put me on your ignore if you want...later *Sighs*

  • SuicidalLover gold member
    July 15

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    YES!!!! Give the good fight! Lol. ;D What a wonderful inspirational take to the prompt sweetie. Congrats on your silver!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • KayJay46 gold member
    July 15
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    Wonderful take... and so deserving... you do have a beautiful touch... Congratulations!
    Ken


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 15

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    Beautiful piece Angel and well deserved silver trophy C


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 15

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    I like how this was a letting go of past dreams, to embrace new realities that could be soothing and wonderful. Really enjoyed your take on thie pic!


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 15

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    hehe i like this.... very good write..... im sure you beat me.... thanks for shairng this and good luck in contest... sis...

  • Cerulean gold member
    July 15
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    Interesting write. I like it.


  • Xianaria gold member
    July 15
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    i like your take on the prompt, great imagery!


  • GreenHrtPaleMoon gold member
    July 15

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    Interesting placement of the picture. I like. "Mother Earth's" right? Cause it's possessive. Anyways. This was sensual and beautiful. This culminates with your PERFECT ending. Love it


    • Angelflower Greeters member
      July 15
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      meh I hate grammar Lol.. I suck at it.. but thanks for pointing that out!
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