I'm so hurt inside
I feel so deceived
so sincerely I trusted
the love that I received
and now I sit here alone
all sad and black n blue
I 100% believed in her
I thought her love was true
she begged and she pleaded
and she looked me in my eyes
and she opened her mouth
and she told me her lies
she made me her promises
she gave me a choice
and then we were together
I could only rejoice
she hugged me and held me
and there were "I love you's" galore
and then she left me for no reason
and the "I love you's" were no more
I gave her my heart
I gave her my all
and I set myself up
for a far brutal fall
she promised and she assured
that she wouldn't make my heart break
and I know now that those promises
were made up and fake
I feel so deceived
although I love her still
I just don't understand
why my heart she had to kill
there was no reason or explanation
no event or catalyst
just one day she dropped me
and now her love is missed
I have no idea why
it was five years in the making
and after all that
it turned out she was faking?
How can that be?
I just don't comprehend
how could she do this?
she's my very best friend
she was talking marriage
and kids and all that
then she took my heart
and tossed it
and watched it go splat...
Author notes
Not more normal work, more of a journal type of poem that I wrote for myself. Sad times...
no comment needed...
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this was sad. but i liked it, i could feel exactly what you were going through./
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damn dude... that sucks, im sorta where u r right now... girls are funny creatures, cant live with em, cant live without em... hope ur feelin a lil better these dayz
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Wow...this seriously brought tears to my eyes. Love can feel like heaven or hurt like hell. People tend to forget the heart is fragile. I seriolusly hope you keep your chin up maybe everything does happen for a reason and she just wasn't the 'one' ya know?
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just keep your head up and you will move on. and just be happy tha she realized her feelings when she did, and not as you were proposing.
great poem
catt~
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I know you probably heard this in every comment...I know exactley how you feel....Just stay strong....You'll get through it...Lovely poem though...wish you did'nt have to write it...
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I can relate to every word, it hurts and it sucks.
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Wow.. that's harsh, I feel for you man..
About the poem, haven't been on AP for ages but it seems you haven't lost your touch
Great writing mate!
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