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Kryptonite

The way you look at me sometimes
Makes me feel weak inside
I don't know how it happened
But you became my Kryptonite

When you touch me I melt
From the warmth of you touch
And when your lips brush mine
I could fall all over but

I am afraid of myself
And the secret I hold inside
I can't let it out
So I'll just buy some time

But when I see you look at me
I feel my heart grow weak
I can't help but fall
But I can't let you see

This secret will die with me
I can never let it show
It is the curse I hold forever
But for now its my time to go


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46. Kryptonite- 3 Doors Down
its kinda a weird interpretation but its kinda just fell out...

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  • Dovina
    July 18, 2008

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    I really like this song and I think that this was a good interpretation. Everyone sees things in a different way. I just hate how just being near someone you go all weak, them being your weakness. thank for your entry!


  • Nomadic Prince
    July 17, 2008

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    That's pretty awesome, I recently tried writing a poem to a song and it came out decent. Awesome job!