The color you smiled
upon lily lips
I loved the way your
hair cascaded down
your subtle hips
your flower bloomed
the thorns subside
and i could love you
with nothing to hide
no fear
no shame
all yellow aside
you were there
and i was inside.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Yellow by AliceinPoetryLand.
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your flower bloomed
the thorns subside.
I loved that line. I love this write. Great work, especially with descreption.
Warmest,
Mylee
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it's hot
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this is a beautiful write...flows nicely with a little rhyme....I really like this
good luck
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I really enjoyed the imagery in this poem. I liked the title too. I think this was very sweet and romantic. Thanks for entering and good luck
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i like your style, nice flow too.brevity is always good for it keeps the reader's attention. nice job
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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A very sensual piece you have written here. Lovely flow and rhyme. Thank you so much for your beautiful entry
Gaylene
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