Your heart is a diamond, raw and rare,
And I'm sorry that In the lonely nights I'm not there,
In my heart I want to help,Give you Light,
And In that Smile, I find the silent words of "It'll all be allright"
Your voice is uncut, Strong and alluring,
I wish that I could be the one that is reassuring,
You to know that your in my arms, It's all okay,
And I could kiss away that fear and shyness, make it go away,
Trust in me and take my hand,
I may not be everything perfect that you had planned,
Come into my arms, Do not be scared,
If you trust me enough, Ill get my tools, your heart will be repaired,
And I'll just hold you till you fall asleep,
Away from him, Be with me, And my heart you will keep,
Go from him, That Vile, that scum,
He doesn't deserve you, he's disrespectful and dumb,
Kiss my lips and know these words,
I may not come with fairy tale's and birds,
But I want to know you, Love you,
I want to be your Guardian Angel, Make your heart nice and new
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A contest entry
- PREWRITTEN POEMS!!!!! by kavi22.
450 points, ended August 5, 2008, 137 entries
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Your voice is uncut, strong and alluring, I wish that I could be reassuring..I fel right at home with these lines. They have a truh hidden in them for me. I loved this poem.
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Well! Well!
I see that you are friends with Lady Dementia. She is my favorite 'dark' poetess. If she like this, then I do to. My romantic writes also contain the same images of demons and angels. You have a soft sensual romantic style that comes off as true. I could not pull off a poem such as this.
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Such a sweet and tender piece twinny! See you can do other themes
And you do them very, very well!! Superb display of your talents! Excellent read twinny 
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Beautifully Inscribed With Tenderness
Bravo sweet soul, I wish you all the best!
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ x
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Wow, this is beautiful... so sweet I never thought I'd see this side... well done!! and brilliant b/g by the by... you have amazing backgrounds...
This lady is very lucky to have your heart, my dear.
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this is a really good poem the rhyming is really nice
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beautiful
i loved this, very nicely put. that forth line seems a little squeezed, but other than that good
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Beautiful poem. The thing i love about your poetry is it isn't overly flashy or complex with stunning imagery, it's a quiet subdued anger that leaves the reader wondering.....great job.
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This is a very nicely written poem. It was full of feeling. I loved the rhyme scheme you used.
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Aww this is so beautiful. Very far from your regular style but none the less one of my faves. Love it Brie.
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aw this is really cute such a pretty piece. Lovely hun!!!
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is this about who i think it is? or am i wrong?
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Cunning, very cunning. and very well put and forthright. It can be twisted into many stories, which I like. Great job!
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This has rendered me speechless, like actually I have no words to describe how this makes me feel. Thank you, you're so amazing. You bring a smile to my face and your words are just so....breathtaking.
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This is a lovely testament to love and dedication! Wonderful, just wonderful! Your first stanza is very much my favorite. I love the imagery! In the third line of your second stanza did you mean: "that you're in my arms"? Nice poem, it gave me happy feelings in my welder's heart! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
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your.... i.... and that....
*sighs*
i really don't have words to describe.
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aww hun this is really wonderful!! you really did a beautiful job!!! the emotion and love in this write is just so beautiful and intense.. who wouldn't want you to be there Guardian Angel and fix their heart?! Such a sweet and loving peom!! bravo hun! this was truly beautiful..
love you lots.. *hugs*
Angel
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