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If the Mindless Plants Can

Maybe
all this water in my lungs
finds itself attributed

to my drowning
in my duty
I take


ALL THIS PRIDE IN!...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    Humm..very creatively depicting the truth of the inside..I love it..... thanks for entering such a wonderful entry in my contest...


  • movedon
    July 19, 2008

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    to my drowning
    in my duty
    I take


    ALL THIS PRIDE IN!...

    Wow.....very strong emotions in this poem. Good luck in the poem. This poem really deserves the gold trophy!

    Warmest,
    Mylee

  • Judith Chandler
    July 17, 2008

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    Interesting. I don't really understand the title but I do like what you say about duty and taking pride in it. I know a few people like that.