it sounded like a horn with a big loud crisp sweet bellow
while in the park one day, i played it for this fellow
he was so impressed with me, he gave me lemon jello
thats it stay mellow
when i was nine years old, i had a yellow cello
it sounded like a horn with a big loud crisp sweet bellow
while in the park one day, i played it for this fellow
he was so impressed with me, he gave me lemon jello
thats it stay mellow
it sounded like a horn with a big loud crisp sweet bellow
while in the park one day, i played it for this fellow
he was so impressed with me, he gave me lemon jello
thats it stay mellow
A contest entry
- Yellow by AliceinPoetryLand.
950 points, ended July 16, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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cute...Unfortunately, it's not only a pre-write, it also rhymes.
Thanks for the link, though. K.
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Your poems always make me smile.
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Lol great this is a really uplifting and positive read Love the story and the rhyme! Thanks so much for a great entry
Gaylene
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heh, this was over the top cute, it made me google, congrats on that
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google? your poem made me search the internet... i meant giggle
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Haha!
The poem and your comment made me crack up laughing.
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i figured you meant that 
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LOL!
That's great. You're doing well with this, young poet.
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